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Marble & Stone Works,
Gt Smith Street,
Westminster, S. W.
Novr 18th 1865
Sir
We beg to enclose a rough draft of the Inscription We have made the letters as large as it is possible – but we think if they are slightly reduced in size – they would look less crowded and better grouped
You will perceive that we have omitted “aged 72 years“ because it will require a separate line – and will make necessary a further reduction in the size of the letters – and as the words are not absolutely essential, we have thought you would not object to their omission – but they can be restored if you still prefer it
The Monument is in a forward state – the Trusses are carved – the Tablet is ready for the Inscription and the back ground is being carved and will be ready in a few days
We have the honour to be Sir Your mo obedt Servts
Henry Poole & Son
H. F. Talbot Esq
Please to correct the punctuation as well as any other parts that need it